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“I love you” Jordan says to his wife lily, while he picks her up and spins her around. Lily was pregnant; she was going to have a little girl. A week later Jordan ran with Lily to the hospital because she was finally going to have the baby. They were so happy but Lily was screaming with pain. When she was giving birth Jordan was watching everything. Jordan was happier than ever. Until when the baby came out. Lily stopped breathing; Jordan was screaming and crying, the doctors were screaming trying to do something to help. Lily was dead! Two months passed and Jordan wouldn’t even look at his baby Brenda. Brenda’s grandmother Anna told Jordan he should hold Brenda in his arm. “NO!” Said Jordan. “That baby was never born Lily would still be here. Anna was telling Brenda that it wasn’t her fault. About two years past and Jordan walks in the house with his new wife. Brenda ran to Jordan saying “daddy daddy” she shows him a picture that she drew fro him he did was push her away, and say “leave me alone!” Brenda’s big blue eyes watered up. Brenda looks at her new step mom Nina. Nina tells Jordan “aww she’s so cute” Jordan just walked away. Then Nina looked at Brenda and said “you little stupid girl, you better stay out of my way.” “That’s why your daddy doesn’t like you.” Brenda was sad and ran to her room where Anna was. Brenda was crying. Anna told her “crying because of your father again” “yea” yea-said Brenda. They started talking. Brenda asked Anna why doesn’t my dad like me did not mean to kill my mom. Anna said “your dad is just mad because he really misses your mom” there was talking more and Brenda got a new stepsister named kiki. Kiki used to laugh at the way they treated Brenda .Nia got kiki to hate Brenda. When Brenda was about 18 and kiki was 17 kiki hated Brenda more than ever just like nia wanted her to. Brenda was a friend with everyone and kind of friendly pretty and smart and everyone just loved her. Expect people she lived with besides anna.nia’s family hated Brenda. One-day nia sent Brenda to the store to by a lot of food for Nia and her family that was coming for the week so. Brenda had to go to the supermarket and by food at the super market. At the supermarket was a young cute kind smart guy named Ramon Jackson was there and he was in ail two and he was talking to Brenda about how he is new to the Country of Mexico he told her about how his family is very poor and he has to work three jobs one at the supermarket part time and another at a school on Fridays at a school and by the time he went to tell her the other job the cash register went [ding] it was 2,618 and 7 cents. They started talking more as he drove the cart to her front door. He walked her home and ever since that day they became great friends. When Brenda walked in her house she found her grand mother crying saying “you’re you’re you’re father.”… Brenda was nervous “what about my father?” said Brenda. “He’s at the hospital.” “we got home and found him on the floor. “ Brenda was crying she left the house running as fast as she could. Jackson saw her running he asked her what was wrong but she just kept running. Brenda was running across a bridge. She stopped at the middle. She was looking over the bridge and started thinking bout all the bad things that are happening in her life. She put one leg over the bridge then the other. Right there when Brenda was bout to let go of the bridge… Jackson came and grabbed her and pulled her in side the bridge. Brenda was so scared she was still crying in Jackson’s arms. Jackson took her to the hospital where her father was. The doctor told Brenda that her father needed heart transplant. Brenda was really scared. Brenda stayed in the hospital with her father for like about a week. No one showed up to volunteer for the transplant. So at the end she volunteered. When Jordan got home he was mad because he thought that his kids and Nia were the only ones that went to visit his in the hospital and not Brenda. Plus [+] Nia started to tell him a whole bunch of lies to Jordan saying that Brenda didn’t visit him and how she wanted him to die. Anna walked in when Nia was saying al the lies about Brenda. Anna got mad and told Jordan the truth. Jordan gave Nia a dirty look. And walked away to go see Brenda. Anna looked at Nia and said “no one lies about by granddaughter like that.” And walked away. Jordan went up stirs to Brenda and told her how sorry he was and if she forgave him. Brenda said “of course I for give you.”
“ I love you you’re my father. Ever since that day Jordan and Brenda spend lots of time together. Jackson and Brenda got married. ^_^ by:celine gil

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